As a developmental editor, I will help you breathe life into your work by pointing out how to beautifully develop your characters, how to create halos around your dialogue, and how to pace your plot, among other things. This is no small task, as it will require my reading your entire manuscript or almost all of it. But it's one thing I've been doing for a long time, so with my passion for it, time management and my analytical abilities, I will happily take your story apart and put it back together. Like an alloy, it'll be better than before by the time I'm done revising it.
Of course, I'll send you my revision plan so you can brush up your work, using it as a guide. This goes without saying that you, as my client, will also be involved in improving the manuscript you've created. I'm only here as a guide, but as that, I promise to do my best.