All Services Writing & Translation books Developmental Editing $5/hr · Starting at $25 I will read your work and:Check for continuity errors eg. Someone’s eyes turn from blue to brown halfway through your manuscript.Advise how to improve readability for your target audience.Give advice on scene-building.Advice on occurrence or passive voice.Advice on POV switches. (point of view) Check for plot holes. About $5/hr · Ongoing Download Resume I will read your work and:Check for continuity errors eg. Someone’s eyes turn from blue to brown halfway through your manuscript.Advise how to improve readability for your target audience.Give advice on scene-building.Advice on occurrence or passive voice.Advice on POV switches. (point of view) Check for plot holes. Skills & Expertise Book EditingBook ProposalsBook WritingContemporary FictionDevelopmental EditingeBook WritingEditingFiction WritingLiterary FictionManuscriptPublishingReadingRomance WritingShort StoriesStory Writing 0 Reviews This Freelancer has not received any feedback. Browse Similar Freelance Experts English Grammar ExpertsEnglish Spelling ExpertsChicago Manual of Style SpecialistsEditorsMicrosoft Word ExpertsBook EditorsProofreadersFiction WritersBook Proposal WritersTechnical EditorsRomance WritersStyle Guide DevelopersBook WritersShort Story WritersRewriting and Revisions ExpertsReading SpecialistsManuscript WritersCopy EditorseBook WritersStory WritersPublishersDevelopmental EditorsEnglish Punctuation Experts