With two decade of editing experience, my developmental edit includes an editorial assessment with in-depth suggestions for improving your work, including comments on the outline, rearranging copy if needed, suggestions for adding material if necessary, and general feedback on how to improve the readability and marketability of the work. I will pay close attention to the structure and content of your work as well as, assess the tone, style, pace, and word choices. If it lacks focus, I will help you find the right direction—the “right” direction generally being the most marketable.