I will read through your manuscript and give you feedback based on content and consistency within your work of fiction. This includes basic editing for grammar and sentence structure. However, the intent here is to give you more in-depth feedback on the point of view, characters, plotline, and whether the story conveys a strong message. Often we get an idea and it starts to ramble, and we just need some help getting the plot back on track. My edits here will help you strengthen the foundation for your work to reach the intended audience.