I have a natural nack to find illogical stuff in your story, words that stick out, actions that don't make sense. I unlock my heart and soul and tell you how your story impacted me. I am able to shift POV, my observations are multidimensional I stated my rate only for the reference. I read slow and take my time to give feedback. I prefer to work for the fixed price. If you want to see my style of feedback, give me a sample of your text and I will provide feedback free of charge! Looking forward hearing from you!