This gig description from Songbird Cottage is well-structured and clearly outlines the services offered. It effectively communicates the types of digital card and stationery designs available, as well as the delivery formats. However, there are a few areas where it could be refined for better clarity and engagement.
Strengths:
✅ Welcoming & Friendly Tone – The introduction feels warm and inviting.✅ Comprehensive Offerings – Covers a wide range of digital stationery products.✅ Clear File Formats & Delivery Options – Specifies file formats (PNG, JPEG, SVG, EPS, Word,).✅ Clarifies No Physical Shipment – Avoids misunderstandings by stating that only digital products are provided.
Suggestions for Improvement:
🔹 Add More Detail on Customization – Mention if customers can request color changes, fonts, or layouts.🔹 Specify Turnaround Time – How quickly can customers expect their files?🔹 Highlight Unique Selling Points – What makes your designs stand out? Any special styles, hand-drawn elements, or premium design touches?🔹 Refine Formatting for Readability – Bullet points and spacing could be improved for better readability.
Refined Version (Polished for Clarity & Engagement)
About This Gig Hello and greetings from Songbird Cottage, your one-stop shop for custom writing and design services!
What I Offer:
🎨 Custom & General Greeting Cards (Sympathy, Retirement, Graduation, New Baby, New Home, Wedding, Promotion, Milestones, etc.)🎉 Personalized Birthday Cards📝 Business & Personal Stationery (Letterheads, Notepads, Branded Paper)💼 Business Cards & Adverts✍️ Editable & Customizable Templates
Available File Formats:
✔️ Instant Digital Download: PNG, JPEG, SVG, EPS✔️ Editable Files: MS Word✔️
Would you like help tailoring it further for a specific audience or brand voice? 😊