I engaged Kayinat as a developmental editor as well as a beta reader. She made copious comments throughout the manuscript. Then she provided me with a comprehensive report that looked at the manuscript from many different perspectives: Story arc, character development, dialogue, plot holes. She ende
d with a review of the whole novel, chapter by chapter, to show me which parts were most effective, which could be enhanced, deleted, or perhaps moved elsewhere, and whether each would either bore the reader or would entice the reader to read more. Extremely thorough review and valuable insights. I can feel my book becoming better just from having read her report!
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Gail Fisher