Thank you for the draft Neatly done. I especially like the more front-loaded layout, the beautifully written summary paragraph at the beginning with a straight-to-the-point title, and the succinct feel overall. Thanks, helpful! You've also nicely pulled together a few points which were somewhat loos
ely flying around. Especially, it feels like, you've compacted the points a bit, trimmed the level of details (dropped dates/months from timeline) which I assume would allow enhanced focus on the key contents of those points (and be a bit more kind to the reader as well!), and also elaborated some parts and brought forward/highlighted some of the design/writing works :-)
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