I really liked this intriguing tale and it’s poetic feel. You have a special gift. You painted a beautiful picture Good luck in your venture! :-) Based on the poem "Fairy Kiss" http://www.writerscarnival.ca/the-fairy-kiss/
BookWorm
Hi Riss, Your images were fluid and flawless, and the use of alliteration really brought the words to life. A really great poem which conjured everything fascinating about dolphins. :D Karen
DPHVampireWriter
Dolphin Dance Excellent! Your poem paints a beautiful picture from but a few words. Thanks for another great poem. "Dolphin Dance" Comment Written 09-Mar-2014 by Ric Myworld
Ric Myworld