Dana Pitely
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Feb 26, 2013
I am very satisfied with Shabana's work, but would like her to be more forthright in her opinions, more honest, even cutthroat if necessary. Right now we are trying to learn how to walk the line between editing and book doctoring. She let a chapter live - one that should have been euthanized. I think she knows now that she should have thrown the chapter back at me - saying "FIX IT, THEN I"LL EDIT IT."
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The Bough and the Fire