A Full Manuscript Critique takes into account all of the items below. I do each phase one pass (one reading) at a time. If you are interested in this comprehensive editing service, I can offer you discounted rates for multiple passes. A quick breakdown of the kind of edits I offer in each phase: PHASE ONE--Developmental/substantive/content edits: addresses character development, plot&structure, pacing, theme, etc.--The "Big Picture Stuff." Should always be done first. PHASE TWO-- Line edits: addresses creative content at sentence and paragraph level; the craft of the prose, voice, narrator/point of view, style, etc. PHASE THREE-- Copy edits/proofreading: addresses the technical stuff. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, typos. Formatting such as paragraphs and spacing. Should always be done last.